Point of view: 3rd person
Theme: Revenge
Characters: Dr.Kill, Dr. Money, Mrs. Money
Ten years ago, in a city, Dr. Money and Mrs. Money were married. Dr.Money needed to go to work. He met Dr. Kill in the office. Both of them were rich. Both of them had $800,000 at the first respectively.
One day, there was a big project for the office and that guy will get $200,000. But the boss gave this job to Dr. Money. He had $1,000,000 at that time.
Dr.Kill was too angry because the boss didn't give the job to him and Dr. Money had $200,000 more than him. He waited a moment and said,'' I will kill Dr. Money!'' Then, he thought about a big idea. He said,'' This idea is easy enough to kill Dr. Money, I can also take all his money.''
After that, Dr. Kill called Mrs. Money and said, '' I am Dr. Kill, the officer in the Bank of China. I know that you are rich, maybe I can sell a product which called insurance. It can be useful when you are in a hospital and you don't need to pay. It only needs you $300,000. It is very cheap. Also, there is a good stock to buy now. It increased 185% last year. Someone said it will increase 300% more. It only needs you $699,901. If you buy all two items, now needs you $999,901, next year it will become $2,000,000, .......''
''Okay, I buy, I give $999,901 to you. Bye!'' said Mrs. Money.
At that time, Mrs. Money and Dr.Money only had $99. But luckily, Dr. Money earned $10,000. (He didn't know what's happened) There were $10,099, can be used for three months.
Dr. Kill had $1,799,901 at that time. He didn’t work with Dr. Money anymore. He used 80% of the money to make his own laboratory and 15% of the money to buy ingredients for making toxic chemicals. After that, he only had $90,000. Three months later, Dr. Kill’s laboratory was established. At that time, Dr. Money knew what happened. He had no money and drank beer at the bar angrily. Then, Dr. Kill invited him to his home and had dinner to say ‘sorry’ to him. Dr. Kill put some toxic chemicals into Dr. Money’s glass. He drank it, and died. Mrs. Money knew this at last. Her husband died and she had no money. Dr. Kill said that if she worked with him and she will have money so she worked with him.
Four months later, Dr. Kill had used all his money. He decided to use the same way to kill Mrs. Money as Dr. Money. This time he took Mrs. Money to a restaurant but Mrs. Money didn’t want to drink. She just ate a plate of spaghetti. So Dr. Kill threw away the toxic chemicals and used some 'mouse chemicals' to put into Mrs. Money’s plate. Mrs. Money ate it, and died.
At the end, the police caught him because of killing Dr. Money and Mrs. Money.
He needed to stay in jail forever. He was lonely. He felt repent that he killed one another before.
[ 516 words ]
Tuesday, March 25, 2008
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