Thursday, February 7, 2008

Lunar New Year Homework

This is a story called November Rain.
Exposition
One day, at the rainbow bar, people at the bar were smoking, drinking and kissing including Axl and Stephanie. They both love each other. But suddenly, an unknown woman went inside the bar and hit Stephanie. Axl felt hurt because the unknown woman hit Stephanie.

Rising Action
Axl was angry that the unknown woman killed Stephanie. He wanted to kill that guy so he drove a car and falled to the cliff but she didn't die. Axl was too angry about this thing so he went into a gun shop to buy a gun. He decided to kill the unknown woman. He also bought a pair of gloves so that the Government couldn't check who is the killer.
Climax
Axl and Stephanie got married in a church but he forgot to bring the ring. He used Slash's ring! After that, they went outside to eat the wedding cake. Suddenly, it rained heavily. People went away and the cake was destoryed, the red wine was spilled. At that time, Axl saw the unknown woman who hit Stephanie at the bar. He wore the gloves to hold the gun and targeted the unknown woman but he was too sad because he killed Stephanie wrongly.
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Falling Action
Stephanie was buried. The wedding party became a funeral service. Everyone was sad expect the unknown woman because he saw that he wanted to kill her at that time but unluckily he killed Stephanie. She was angry so she wanted to kill Axl.
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Resolution
The unknown woman went to buy a gun too. She killed Axl but this time Slash saw that. Axl was dead. Slash went to the police station and told it to the police. Finally, the unknown woman went into the jail.