Character :Jo=forgetful, bookworm, confused
Francesco=bookworm, angry, worried
On Thursday, I asked Jo to read books with me on Saturday(8th Decmber) 2:00p.m in Yau Ma Tei Public Library. At 2:00p.m, I went to Yau Ma Tei Public Library. I waited outside the library until 2:30pm but I still can't see Jo. Then, I called Jo.
''Hi, Jo. I am Francesco Tse. Where are you?'' I asked.
''I stand outside Kowloon Public Library. Where are you?'' asked Jo.
''I stand outside Yau Ma Tei Public Library. Oh, Jo. You go to a wrong library. Maybe you take no.7, no.81C or no.271 bus to Yau Ma Tei Public Library now. I will wait for you. '' I said.
''Okay, I will take the bus. Oh, there is a no.271 bus coming. Bye!'' said Jo.
15 minutes later, Jo met me. It was 2:45pm. We went into the library to read books until 4:00pm. I borrowed 4 books. Jo borrowed 6 books. We went home happily.
Jo forgot to return the books. She remembered it on 28th December(should be return on 22nd). She needed to pay ($0.5*6 days*6 books)=$18 for late submission.
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2 comments:
Hi Francesco, sorry about the "Belo" thing; please let me know when I make those mistakes instead of asking Derek to help you. We can talk.
As for your story, it was obvious that Jo was not only confused, she is forgetful as well! Maybe it's difficult to tell that someone is lonely unless we explicitly state it. Furthermore, it was hard to tell that you were angry, and worried. Perhaps you could have shouted at Jo instead of simply talking to her politely!
This was a good job - B+.
Mr. Woo, thank you for your comments. I will changed Jo's personality.
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