Friday, September 28, 2007
Mid-Autumn Festival
At Mid-Autumn Festival(25/9), After I had the lesson and the big-brother-and-sister activity, I went home and did my homework. At 6:30p.m, we went to a restaurant and had dinner with grandma. After that, we went to Clear Water Bay Beach with our friend's family by car. His name is Anson. We built sandcastles there. We went home at midnight. I felt very tired.
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I enjoyed your Mid-Autumn narrative, Francesco; it was full of great information. Perhaps, however, there are better ways to introduce characters - such as Anson, and your family - in your story; we'll work on this.
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